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Query Letter Writing and Review

One page that opens the door.

Overview

The query letter is the most-read page an author ever writes. It is read by agents, commissioning editors and competition judges before a single page of the manuscript, and it is usually read in under a minute. This service writes — or rewrites — that page until it works.

If you already have a query, we review it against industry conventions and return a marked-up revision. If you are starting from scratch, we draft the letter with you from your synopsis and manuscript. Either way, you finish with a one-page letter that respects the reader's time.

What this service includes

  • Hook and premise refinement
  • Industry-standard letter structure
  • Comparable titles guidance
  • Author biography and credentials framing
  • Personalisation guidance for each submission
  • Written review of your existing letter, where you have one

How it works

  1. You share your synopsis, a sample of the manuscript and any existing query letter.

  2. We agree the letter's hook, comparables and tone for your genre.

  3. You receive a revised or drafted query letter with line notes.

  4. We tailor variants for the specific agents or publishers on your submission list.